Audio Where are your thoughts of my Music

[QuahogtheCreator]

Here's a Soundtrack in there if is too loud lower the volume of the audio this is Littleroot Town i made this from myself by me and I give credit to Pokemon Altair and Sirius Team, and I'm working on the remake of Pokemon Altair and Sirius.

 

[Payou]

Yo,

I'm not a music composing expert but I'll try to help you with my feedback. Here's how I feel :

• Drums sounds cool but feels like it's too loud.
• The main instrument sounds odd and I feel like it's off-key
• I guess that's still a WIP but too much is going on from 0:57 to the end and cuts abruptly
• Tbh during the first listening I didn't like it at all and felt like it was cacophony. It took me 3 listening before realizing what was to be heard in your song. You should make more "space", your instruments play all over each other and we can't really appreciate it.

My bad if some points are unclear, English isn't my mother tongue. Hope this helps!

 

[QuahogtheCreator]

Yo,

I'm not a music composing expert but I'll try to help you with my feedback. Here's how I feel :

• Drums sounds cool but feels like it's too loud.
• The main instrument sounds odd and I feel like it's off-key
• I guess that's still a WIP but too much is going on from 0:57 to the end and cuts abruptly
• Tbh during the first listening I didn't like it at all and felt like it was cacophony. It took me 3 listening before realizing what was to be heard in your song. You should make more "space", your instruments play all over each other and we can't really appreciate it.

My bad if some points are unclear, English isn't my mother tongue. Hope this helps!

Ok i used FL Studio 21 and how do i make more space for an instruments

 

[Payou]

I said "space" but I don't really know how to explain it. What I mean is that your instruments are overlapping too much and we can't really make out what to listen to

 

[QuahogtheCreator]

So I just the remastered the music and I lower the volume with the mixer and the music isn't overlapping. and the instrument isn't off-key anymore. Thanks for feedbacking with me. Cool Regards, Quahog

 

[Mr. SU]

It's a good arrangement. The volume mixing could still use some work though. I'm also a novice with FL Studio myself so it's hard to explain it but the horns and the strings need to be in different places in the wavelength, it's not enough to just lower the volume of one spot. I'd reccomend putting the strings in the center since they're the melody and moving the horns to either the left or right so they don't occupy the same spot. Try to put all of the instruments in different spots on the wavelength so they don't overlap with each other.

 

[QuahogtheCreator]

So i used some GBAMusRiper to rip music from the rom hacks and i just remake the Littleroot Town but isn't overlapping the instruments but i just make the route music and the petalburg city.

 

[QuahogtheCreator]

Here some my new music